rattling china—
not daring to break
the silence
moonless night her phantom pregnancy
FemkuMag, An e-zine of Women’s Haiku issue seven December 2018
https://docs.wixstatic.com/ugd/f4c0ea_a14cdbb4d0f140db84887980201d12b9.pdf?fbclid=IwAR3G8JY-dgmxt1G_osV9bz0CBGnGt2L8qC_02xmVQep5Roamgqz_SosrXVw
muscle car . . .
passing hip-hop beats
in my bones
A Sense of Place: City Sidewalk – touch
Troutswirl, The Haiku Foundation Blog, December 26, 2018
moonless night
a lappet moth taps
on the window
Stardust Haiku Journal, Issue 24, December, 2018
https://drive.google.com/file/d/129opSmTfiWc0Y_OYAb5b20ewLLTtXeFL/view
cupped hands—
the cool taste
of a sidewalk fountain
A Sense of Place: City sidewalk tastes, December 19, 2018
Troutswirl, The Haiku Foundation Blog
https://www.thehaikufoundation.org/2018/12/19/a-sense-of-place-city-sidewalk-taste/?fbclid=IwAR0ykTmli5YewVTHzh16mFJNTMDIjmgLT-gmbmIxpm0ZyIPt7foxXdjDxEk
short days—
my shadow stretches
across the field
hedgehog
the deep sleep
of winter trees
Autumn Moon Haiku Journal, issue 2:1, Fall/Winter, December, 2018
city sidewalk
the musk of leaves
in the gutter
A Sense of Place: City sidewalk scents, December 12, 2018
Troutswirl, The Haiku Foundation Blog
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Haiku – Luca’s Lily Pad
blustery wind
kicking a leaf
into winter
Commentary by Luca Cenisi: Another great piece of work, where the unmarked cut at the end of line 1 gives continuity to a reading that favors a dynamic and fragile vision of reality, according to the aesthetic rule of shiori しをり. The exasperation of the movement, rendered through the use of terms such as ‘blustering’ and ‘kicking’, is partly mitigated by the (generally) soft and quiet image of winter in line 3, while the alliteration of the sound ‘i’ through the whole poem enhances a sense of clearness (kido 輝度) and adaptation.
My Haiku Pond – Luca’s Lily Pad: a weekly column – by Luca Cenisi
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1NCUecVsUOm2GwhgImvOOCYDWcrNht-vS/view
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