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Tanka – Luca’s Lily Pad

  two otters float across the moon holding hands on the bridge we watch the world flow by   Commentary: A tanka 短歌 (‘short poem’) with a classic and timeless aftertaste focused on love (ai 愛), the main theme of … Continue reading

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Haiku – Luca’s Lily Pad

  blustery wind kicking a leaf into winter   Commentary by Luca Cenisi: Another great piece of work, where the unmarked cut at the end of line 1 gives continuity to a reading that favors a dynamic and fragile vision … Continue reading

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Haiku – Luca’s Lily Pad

  tarot reading the chattering of magpies . Martha Magenta . Luca Cenisi’s Comment: This haiku strikes for its incisive juxtaposition between the two parts. There’s no cutting mark (kireji 切れ字); still, the switch from a deeply human (and esoteric) … Continue reading

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Haiku – Luca’s Lily Pad

  chill wind kids on bikes run over my shadow   Luca’s Lily Pad, 12 November, 2018    https://www.facebook.com/plugins/post.php?href=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.facebook.com%2FMyHaikuPond%2Fposts%2F1967746199978559&width=500

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